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Screening: T, 12:30-3:20
Class: Th, 12:30-2:20
Room: CMU 120

Instructor
Kimberlee Gillis-Bridges
Padelford A-305
543-4892

Hours
TTh
10:30-12:00
and by appointment

Last Updated: 2/7/02
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Clip Exam Scale and Discussion 

Exam Scale
 
30=4.0   20=3.0 10=2.0
29=3.9  19=2.9  9=1.5
28=3.8  18=2.8  8=1.3
27=3.7  17=2.7  7=1.1
26=3.6  16=2.6  6=1.0
25=3.5   15=2.5 5=.7
24=3.4  14=2.4  4=.6
23=3.3 13=2.3 3=.5
22=3.2  12=2.2 2=.3
21=3.1   11=2.1 1=.1

Exam Discussion

Clip responses that received ten points not only described technical elements at play in a particular clip, but also discussed the significance of those elements in terms of the film’s narrative or themes.  Moreover, successful responses provided evidence for arguments made about the symbolism, thematic associations, or narrative importance of formal elements.  Clip responses that did not receive a full ten points exhibited one or more of the following characteristics:

  • Clip was not identified.
  • Response contained a careful description of the scene’s technical elements—sometimes with each camera angle and lighting technique explained.  However, the writer failed to analyze the significance of the techniques described; he or she did not address or paid little attention to how the techniques communicated particular themes or highlighted aspects of the narrative.
  • Writer discussed the importance of the scene, but paid little or no attention to the scene’s formal elements.
  • Response lacked depth of analysis; the writer noted particular patterns or techniques, but the discussion of the elements’ significance concentrated on superficial effects (example: Minnelli’s use of bright lighting in the “Summer 1903” segment depicts a hot summer day).
  • Writer made arguments about the clip’s significance, but provided no evidence to support the argument (example: lighting in Jeux Interdits makes Paulette appear angelic).
  • Evidence of the clip did not support the writer’s argument.
Although I endeavor to keep my comments brief, I generally try to engage in a dialogue with you about your ideas (one of the pleasures of reading exams is that I get the chance to see a variety of readings, some of which I haven’t previously considered).  My comments tend to fall into the following categories:
  • Praise for strong analysis.
  • Questions that point to the need for you to discuss the significance of technique, cite evidence or provide more explanation.
  • Expansions/discussion/questions connected to provocative, gutsy, or interesting readings you’ve proposed.
  • Calls to take a point further, to explore it significance in more depth.
  • Discussion of how the scene’s evidence supports or runs counter to your reading.
  • Jokes—if you took Tuesday’s “extra study time” to draw a picture or advise me as to what your grade should be, I responded in kind.

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