Homework Assignment 3:  Peer Critique Practice

During class on Monday, January 10, we will discuss guidelines for effective cinema studies writing.  I will compile the class's comments into a peer critique sheet that will be uploaded to the class Web page by 3:00 p.m.  To access the sheet, click here.

In class on Monday, I will also distribute a sample paper from one of my previous film courses.  Using the Web peer critique sheet as a guideline, write comments on the essay.  You should do the following in your comments:

• Underline the writer's main argument and restate it in your own words in the margins of the paper.  If you cannot identify a thesis or focusing question, note this in the margins of the paper.
• In the margins of the paper, identify two to three places where the writer could develop the argument.  Pose questions that you think will help the writer develop the argument or explain why the argument isn't convincing to you.
• Identify at least one of the writer's strengths.  In the margins of the paper, explain why you think the author has done something effectively

At the bottom of the page, write three suggestions the writer could use to revise the essay, assuming that the essay is a first draft.  Assuming that the essay is a final draft, note the grade you would give the paper and be prepared explain why you would assign this grade.

Remember to write your name on the commented essay.  Bring the marked essay to class on Wednesday, January 12.