Has a substantive thesis and critique fully evaluates selected elements of the article; the thesis is defendable, clearly explained, and supported in the body of the critique
Shows nuanced comprehension of the article’s thesis and primary claims; the writer’s assessment of the article displays substantial depth, fullness and complexity of thought
Expresses ideas clearly and commands the reader’s attention
Demonstrates clear, unified and coherent organization
Is fully developed and detailed, with assessment of article’s strengths and weaknesses supported by persuasive reasoning and references to the article and/or film under analysis; there is an appropriate balance between providing evidence and analyzing that evidence
Has a sophisticated style (remarkable variety of sentence pattern, smooth transitions between ideas, superior control of diction)
Properly cites source material
Has few, if any, minor errors in grammar, usage or mechanics
A 50- to 69-Point Critique (2.5-3.4, B Range)
Has a clear thesis and essay analyzes selected elements of the article but may not do so completely; the thesis may be clear and well-argued, but could use additional support or development; or the essay may address more aspects of the article than it can adequately discuss
Shows sufficient comprehension of the article’s thesis and primary claims; the writer’s assessment of the article displays some depth and complexity of thought
Expresses ideas clearly
Demonstrates effective organization
Is well developed, with assessment of article’s strengths and weaknesses supported by sensible reasoning and appropriate references to the article and/or film under analysis; however, some evidence may detract from the analysis and some ideas might not be fully explored.
Demonstrates balance between evidence and analysis for the most part, but balance may be weak in places
Has an effective style (some variety of sentence patterns, transitions between ideas, accurate diction)
Properly cites source material, but may have errors in citation format
Has few errors in grammar, usage or mechanics
A 30- to 49-Point Critique (1.5-2.4, C Range)
Has a thesis that may not be entirely clear and essay does not adequately assess each selected element of the article; essay may list many strengths or weaknesses, but analyze few
Shows insufficient comprehension of the article’s thesis or little awareness of its complexity; may treat the article simplistically or repetitively
Communicates ideas clearly for the most part, but may have some lapses in clarity
Has a recognizable organizational pattern, but the relation among parts is not consistently clear enough to provide a coherent focus
Is unevenly developed; writer may offer sufficient reasoning or references to the article and/or film under study to support some assessments of strengths or weaknesses, but not others
Demonstrates some balance between evidence and analysis
Has an adequate style (limited variation in sentence patterns, transitions between most ideas, diction accurate for the most part)
Cites the majority of source material, but occasionally material may be clearly cited but not referenced in parentheses
Has some errors in grammar, usage or mechanics, but demonstrates basic control of these areas
A 14- to 29-Point Critique (.7-1.4, D Range)
Has an unclear thesis or thesis undistinguishable from the article author’s; essay describes the article and meets basic length requirements, but does not evaluate the article in any meaningful fashion
Lacks focus or demonstrates confused or simplistic thinking; writer may demonstrate no overall conception of article’s thesis and primary claims
May not communicate ideas clearly
Is ineffectively organized, with no clear relationship between the parts of the essay
May not provide adequate or appropriate reasoning or article/film references to support assessment of strengths and weaknesses, or may provide details without connecting them to an assessment of strengths or weaknesses
Demonstrates little relationship between assessment and evidence
Has stylistic weaknesses (no variety of sentence patterns, few transitions, imprecise diction)
Indicates use of source material, but does not have consistent parenthetical references
Has occasional major errors in grammar, usage or mechanics or frequent minor errors that interfere in the reader's understanding of the essay
A 0- to 13-Point Critique (0-.6, F Range)
Has no thesis or has an incomprehensible thesis
May be deliberately off-topic and demonstrate no understanding of the article
Does not communicate ideas clearly
Lacks coherent organization
Shows no development of ideas; may simply summarize the article or paraphrase a section of it
Has an incoherent style (difficulties with sentence structure, pattern of diction errors)
Presents another writer’s work as the author’s own
Has pervasive pattern of errors in grammar, usage and mechanics that renders the essay unreadable