BIS 347

History of American Documentary Films

Winter 2008

David S. Goldstein, Ph.D.

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Documentary Film Proposal

Due in final learning portfolio no later than 3:15 p.m. on Monday, March 10


The Goldstein Foundation

Loot for your shoot.™

c/o Interdisciplinary Arts and Sciences
18115 Campus Way NE
Box 358530
Bothell, WA 98011-8246

February 4, 2008

Dear Sir or Madam:

We understand that you are on your way to earning a bachelor's degree at the University of Washington, Bothell. We know that the graduates of that institution are consistently bright, well-rounded, thoughtful, perceptive, and creative (perhaps partly as a result of the outstanding professors there). We therefore believe that you have all the makings of an excellent documentary filmmaker. We are prepared to offer you $500,000 to make a fifty-minute documentary film on a topic of your choice (the only limitation is that the film cannot be about you) if we select a proposal that you submit. Please carefully review the attached documentation. We look forward to reading your proposal.  This offer is only for UWB students!

Sincerely,

David S. Goldstein, Ph.D.

Founder and President


The Goldstein Foundation

INSTRUCTIONS FOR PROPOSALS

Please download the application form (questionnaire) from the Assignments area of Blackboard and follow its instructions.

You will submit your paper electronically in your final learning portfolio, for which I will provide separate submission instructions.  I expect to return final learning portfolios, which will contain your proposal, with my comments, within ten days of your submission, so the earlier you submit your portfolio, the sooner you will get it back.

Your proposal must be a Microsoft Word document.

Be sure to allow some time for unforeseen problems with the electronic submission or other unforeseeable circumstances like illness or computer malfunction.

All of the ideas and writing must be your own, except when you cite the contributions of others (e.g., using the ideas or words of a published author). You may--and are encouraged to--use the Writing Center <http://www.uwb.edu/writingcenter/>.

Your proposal (the version submitted in your learning portfolio) will be evaluated and rated as follows:

Completeness (responds appropriately to the requirements)

20 percent

Depth of response (quality of detail and support; sophistication of ideas and argument)

70 percent

Quality of writing (organization; spelling, grammar, diction, punctuation)

10 percent

TOTAL

30 percent of final course grade

Although the mechanics of the writing account for only a small percentage of your grade, you should do your best to make your paper mechanically sound. After you produce a draft of your analysis, read "Tips for Better Prose" at <http://faculty.washington.edu/davidgs/Prose.html> and edit your paper accordingly. I recommend printing that document, and, after you finish writing your paper, check the items off one by one as you check your paper. Although the mechanics of writing are less important to me than the ideas expressed (which is evidenced in the proportion of your grade allocated to each of these aspects of your essay, as described above), the mechanics inevitably improve the effectiveness of your communication of ideas, which, after all, is your ultimate goal with each piece of writing that you do.

You will not have an opportunity to revise your film proposal, so I strongly urge you to consult with me and with the Writing Center before submitting the proposal in your learning portfolio.


Thank you for preparing this application. We look forward to eviscerating evaluating your proposal. Our Department of Application Viability and Importance Determination (a.k.a. DAVID) will return its evaluation of your proposal, with carefully considered comments, about ten days after you submit it. If your application is approved, a check for $500,000 will be attached to the returned proposal. In the event that no check accompanies the returned application, we hope that the chance to think about why a film should be made and what its purpose would be, in the context of American documentary tradition, has been a worthwhile exercise anyway.

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